Вопросы не принимаются, т.к. не соответствуют коммуникативной задаче. Когда ты собираешься дарить? ответ очевиден - на день рождения; третий вопрос не о подарке, а о Дэйве.
Орфографическая
school
Орфографическая
of
Лексическая
to comment on the data/analyse the data
см. https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english-russian/outline
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Лексическая
лишнее
Логическая
неверный линкер, это линкер эссе старого типа, здесь мы ничего не доказываем; если есть firstly, то должно быть и secondly по правилам употребления таких ликеров
Хорошая работа, мой друг! Мне приятно видеть, что твои результаты идут вверх!
you
have recieved an e-mail message from your friend Dave
What
is your attitude to horse riding? Is it a popular hobby in your region? Why, or
why not? What hobbies are popular with teens in your region?
I
have just bought a present for my friend's birthday...
-answer
his questions
-ask
3 about the present
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Dear Dave,
Thank a lot for your message. It’s awesome to hear from you.
Of course it’s no problem at all to answer your questions about horse riding.
Actually, I consider horse riding a very interesting hobby and I’d like to try it one day. Besides, horse riding is quite popular in my region, because everyone here loves horses; there is even horse riding school for children. All in all, such hobbies as fencing and playing chess are popular in my region.
By the way that’s wonderful news about the present for your friend’s birthday! What have you bought? When are you going to give it him? How did you choose this present?
Just drop me a line when you can.
Yours,
Ekaterina
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Лариса Николаевна Пономаренко
project on why young people in Zetland do sports. pie-chart belowlosing weight - 35%getting rid of stress - 25%getting together with friends - 19%following parents' advice - 11%improving health - 10% -conclude by giving and explaining your opinion on the importance of sports in the lives of young people
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Nowadays the idea of doing sports is becoming increasingly popular. I am doing a scgool project the aim if which is to find out why young people do sports in Zetland. I have found some information in the form of a pie-chart. I am going to provide an outline on the present data and give my personal view on the subject.
As can be seen, the statistics illustrate each reason why young people do sports, in percentages. Firstly, losing weight is the most frequently selected option with the result of 35%. Contrastly, improving health is the lowest priority, as only 10% select it.
Expectedly, opinions on such contentious topic are wide-ranging.While getting rid of stress is a very common choice, following parents' advice is a lot less popular. It can be assumed that many young people in Zetland suffer from stress.
Overall, the statistics may reveal a problem related to doing sports. Due to the fact that losing weight is the most common answer, it is likely that people can destroy their health while trying to lose weight. A practical way of solving it is to control yourself and avoid overtraining.
In conclusion, I think that it is vital for young people to do sports, because it can improve their health, make them stronger and more attractive.