it's easy to follow a healthy diet.
Some people claim it requires much time and effort to follow an active and healthy lifestyle. But others don’t t agree with this opinion. So, who is right?
I do believe that it’s an indispensable part of our life to be physically and physiologically healthy. Having been explained that it’s not difficult to follow certain rules to function our bodies properly I decided to change habits in favor of health. Firstly, if one gets up and goes to bed at one at the same time every day, one definitely will feel better. It can be difficult at first but it doesn’t always happen. Secondly, it's possible to choose good-qualified nutritionists who quickly pick up a healthy life which one likes and no sacrifices are needed. Finally, any kind of simple trainings really helps make our bodies function with vigor and alertness.
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Хотя у вас формально нет заключения, я вижу, что оно написано неверно. В заключении можно указать на существование двух противоположных точек зрения (не раскрывая их, т.к. они уже раскрыты в других абзацах) и четко обозначить свою позицию по теме от первого лица ед.ч., например, I still believe that ……иначе вам скажут на апелляции, что вы нечетко выразили свое мнение. А это уже неполностью раскрытый аспект в РКЗ. И они будут правы. Успехов!