It's reported that billions of dollars are spent on space exploration projects every year. Some people believe that this money should be used to solve problems on Earth.
We are living in a centery where space is very important thing to explore. Our goverments spend billions of dollars on space programms. But some people argue that we should solve our earthly problem first.In my opinion space is fascinating and awesome place and I truly believe that one day people can live on other planet. I'm a realist though. So I perfectly understand that here on the Earth we have enough problems to resolve. Maybe we should spend all this billions on solutions poverty and hunger all over the world. But if we stop paying attention to space at all how we will progress? It's extremely important for our civilazation to keep
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