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Some people think that extreme sports help to build character.
Nowadays more and more people go in for extreme sports. Some people think it helps to develop character, others find them awful and dangerous.
In my opinion, extreme sport is a good way to develop yourself physically and psychologically. Firstly, if you do any of extreme sport, you are often exposed to danger. You have to make yourself overcome fear and move forward. Secondly, extreme sport is often a team activity. For example, mountaineering is usually done by a group of people who depend on each other. So, they have to trust and help each other. Finally, such activities prepare people to get over various disasters.
An opposite opinion is that it
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