Some people think that extreme sports help to build character.
In this day and age, many people are crazy about healthy lifestyle and love doing sports. Sometimes they do extreme sports, which are believed to be not only a good way to keep fit but also to build a strong character. However, others claim that extreme sports are way too much challenging and may do harm.
From my point of view, doing extreme sports is indeed a great way to form a goal-oriented personality. Doing something «on the edge» let people become more decisive, responsible and fearless. Moreover, doing any kind of sport may help a person to learn how to follow strict rules and instructions, especially in extreme sports.
On the other hand, there are people who disagree with this point of view. They consider extreme sports to be dangerous not only
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