There are lots of rules in our life. Safety rules, standards of conduct, traffic rules and so on. Some people strictly follow all of them. Others believe that many of the rules are useless or silly. What's your opinion?
People started to create different rules many years ago and continue to develop legislation. Therefore it is really difficult to imagine our life without various norms and social rules. Many people follow them, but there are some people, who are convinced that rules are unnecessary.
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